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Waking dead.

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June 4, 2013
~dextroannie shows a darker side to poetry reminiscent of such poems as For Annie from a late Edgar Allan Poe; Waking dead. makes excellent use of allusions, alliteration, and references.
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If Death be sweet saviour and remorse
    a psychopomp, midwife to the passing,
Thanatos, Ankou, Yama, Memitim, Hypnos,
save me to rest and to sleep
take me in deep
in soft, make this all in my head
   to where my friends and my
   family, my father
reside
     "sweet death, you are the only god
Who comes as a servant when he is called"

So here I am, a lullaby leaving my lips in
the form of a cry of a whistle
in hopes an answer of
sweet serenity will greet
my prayers.
Overwhelming and saddening few weeks, resulting in a preoccupation with death in all its forms and a loving of Stevie Smith, who's words I quoted here.

References to mythical personifications of death from different cultures included. I understand the 'odd one out' is Hypnos, the God of sleep, but this is to signify the bond between the two (indeed, in Greek mythology Thanatos, the God of Death, is brother to Hypnos) and to lead onto the next line.
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:+fav:


i hope you don't mind my humble feature:
your lovely piece is handpicked.


thank you,

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